Novel Kicks Writing Room: Character Challenge – The Secret

Welcome back to the Novel Kicks Writing Room.

It’s week three of our character challenge.

Over the next few weeks, we’ll take a character from a simple idea and gradually develop them into someone with a personality, history, relationships, flaws, fears and a meaningful character arc.

You don’t need to be writing a novel to take part. Your character can be created specifically for these exercises, or you can use a character from a story you’re already working on.

 

WEEK 3 — The Secret

 

Everyone has things they don’t tell other people.

Give your character a secret.

It could be:

  • Something they’ve done.
  • Something they haven’t done.
  • Something they’re ashamed of.
  • Something they know.
  • Something they are afraid someone will discover.
  • Something from their past.

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Book Extract: Dreadnought by Robin Bennett

I am so excited to be welcoming Robin Bennett to Novel Kicks and the blog tour for his book, Dreadnought.

A child sees things she’s sure don’t exist. The adults call it trauma. They’re both wrong.

On a remote Yorkshire headland known as Dreadnought, seven-year-old Cass Delaval begins to glimpse figures and fragments tied to a past that refuses to stay buried.

As the world edges toward conflict, Cass is drawn into a family mystery stretching back to the Second World War: a missing boy, a hidden weapon, and a family secret.

Because whatever has lain dormant on Dreadnought goes deep into our past … and it isn’t finished with us yet.

Dreadnought is a story of loyalty and hope, where the courage of one small girl may be our last defence.

 

Robin has very kindly shared an extract with us today. We hope you enjoy. 

 

*****beginning of extract*****

 

This is a scene early in the book, from the youngest protagonist, Cass Delaval, aged 7. It sums up her personality, presages some of the novel’s mystery surrounding her brother, Bertie, and is the first proper demonstration of the real threat of war that sends the family to North Yorkshire. To Dreadnought.

 

Cass

 

‘Good morning Cassandra, I trust you are well?’ Eva’s mum always used words like Cass was a grown-up, but the way she said them, with gaps, sounded like she also thought Cass was stupid.

 ‘Hello,’ replied Cass solemnly, ignoring the question, then gave a little wave and a smile to Eva who was looking at them out of the car window. Eva was her joint best friend with Julia. ‘I’m already ready,’ she said, closing the front door and walking past Mrs Reicher.

 ‘Oh,’ Eva’s mum looked a bit put out her next question had been pre-empted as she followed, rather than led, to the car.

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Novel Kicks Fiction Friday: The Wrong Name

Welcome to Fiction Friday, our weekly flash fiction challenge.

Here’s how it works:

Set a timer for five minutes and start writing

Keep going for as long as you can once the timer goes off

No editing allowed—raw writing only

When you’re finished, feel free to share in the comments (but there’s no pressure.) 

 

Today’s prompt: The Wrong Name.
 

Every morning, a woman visits the same little café on her way to work. She orders the same coffee, sits at the same table and exchanges a few words with the owner.

One Tuesday, the owner greets her by a different name.

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Book Extract: Play It Back by Sara Palacios

Please join me in welcoming Sara Palacios to Novel Kicks and the blog tour for her book, Play It Back.

Ten years. Two hearts. One love story that never forgot how it began.

Ten years ago, Erin Campbell left Texas without saying goodbye to the only boy she’d ever loved.

Ten years later, he’s the biggest name in country music… and every song he’s ever written is about her.

After losing her mother at eighteen, staying meant facing a life she no longer recognized. So Erin left – her hometown, her grieving father, and Jake Ingram, her best friend, first love, and the future she’d always imagined.

A decade later, Erin has built a successful career as one of New York City’s most sought-after photographers, creating the life she always thought she wanted. But no amount of distance – or success – has been enough to silence the memories she left behind.

When her father needs surgery, Erin returns to Texas expecting to stay only long enough to help him recover.

Instead, she comes face to face with Jake.

The boy she left behind is now one of country music’s brightest stars, known for writing songs that have captivated millions. Fans have spent years wondering who inspired the heartbreak woven through every album.

Only Erin knows the answer.

As old memories resurface and long-buried truths finally come to light, Erin and Jake must decide whether the love they never stopped carrying is strong enough to overcome the heartache they never healed from – or whether ten years is simply too much time to ask two hearts to begin again.

Play It Back is a heartfelt second-chance romance about first love, grief, forgiveness, and finding your way home.

Because some love stories don’t end, they simply wait for you to come home.

 

Sara has shared an extract with us today. We hope you enjoy. 

 

*****beginning of extract*****

 

I’m kicking things off with an extract from the prologue of Play It Back. Interestingly, the prologue was quite literally the last part of the novel I wrote.

By that point, the manuscript had already gone through a pretty rigorous review process with a couple of beta readers, but I couldn’t shake the feeling that something was missing. I wanted the opening to immediately put Jake, my MMC, on the page and give readers a glimpse of who he is, while also planting a few hints about what they could expect from the story ahead.

And this prologue did exactly that.

My favorite part? Honestly, all of it. But if I had to choose, it would be Jake Ingram fresh off his third tour, talking about some of his new music when he accidentally reveals a little more than he intended during an interview with journalist Timmy Collins. Suddenly, there’s a question about a heartbreak ballad everyone seems to love… and perhaps a certain someone who inspired it.

I hope you enjoy this little glimpse into Jake’s world.

 

COLLINS: How does it feel to wrap your third tour?

He leans back, considering.

INGRAM: It feels good. Real good. This album was different; took a few risks. I didn’t know how people would take it, but it connected. That’s all you can really ask for.

COLLINS: Any songs that stood out for you along the way?

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Novel Kicks Writing Room: 10 Week Character Challenge – What Do They Want?

Welcome back to the Novel Kicks Writing Room.

It’s week two of our character challenge.

Over the next ten weeks, we’ll take a character from a simple idea and gradually develop them into someone with a personality, history, relationships, flaws, fears and a meaningful character arc.

You don’t need to be writing a novel to take part. Your character can be created specifically for these exercises, or you can use a character from a story you’re already working on.

 

 

WEEK 2 — What Do They Want?

 

Every interesting character wants something. But sometimes what they think they want isn’t what they actually need.

 

First, complete these sentences:

My character wants…

They believe getting it will make them…

What they actually need is…

They don’t realise this because…

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