Welcome back to the Novel Kicks Writing Room.
Today, we will be writing about a person before they embark on a journey.
A character is packing a bag. They are leaving somewhere — a city, a relationship, a job, a country — and they can only take what fits in one bag. Every object they choose to pack reveals something about who they are, what they value, and what they are willing to leave behind.
Before you start writing, decide three things about your character:
Where are they leaving?
Why are they leaving?
Are they coming back?
Write your answers in a sentence each. Keep them simple. These are your foundations, not your story.
Once you’ve done that, choose the objects:
Write a list of exactly five objects your character packs. For each one, write a single sentence explaining why they chose it. The objects should be specific and concrete — not “a book” but “a battered paperback copy of something specific with a coffee ring on the cover.” The more precise the detail, the more the object will tell the reader about the person holding it.
Now choose one object they almost pack but decide to leave behind. Write a sentence about why they put it back.
Write the scene.
Write the scene in 400–600 words. Your character is alone, packing. No dialogue. No other characters in the room. The only story is this person, this bag, and these objects.
As they pack each item, let the reader understand, through the way the character handles the object, hesitates, or moves quickly, what each one means. Don’t explain. Show.
The scene should begin with the bag empty and end with the bag zipped shut.
Have fun.
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