Trisha Ashley – Process between the first draft and finished manuscript.

Trisha Ashley, the author of Chocolate Shoes and Wedding Blues, The Magic Of Christmas and Wedding Tiers takes over our blog and tells us about her process between the first draft and finished manuscript.

I write directly onto the computer, touch-typing, though I need to see my words in print on paper before the world I am writing about becomes real to me, so I print everything out.  This can also be useful if your computer loses the chapter and you forgot to back up onto a memory stick or whatever.

My first drafts are usually somewhere between eighty and a hundred thousand words long and written in the stream-of-consciousness style made popular by James Joyce, since I just pour the words out onto the page and don’t always bother with the punctuation or typos.  If I’m too tired to think creatively in the afternoon, though, I will often go back and tidy up the work I did in the morning.

I rewrite the second draft from the start, and this is the moment when it all pulls together and takes wing.  It also expands radically, as I write out in full the events that have only been mentioned as having happened, vital conversations that have taken place off the page, making whole scenes or even chapters out of brief mentions.  This is classic ‘showing not telling’.  If I have some interesting fresh research on a subject thread then I will also wind that information through the novel from the beginning, since it often throws up new ideas and directions, or the main protagonists react to it in an unexpected way, so that the last third of the book especially becomes very different to the way it was in the first draft.

Before printing out the second draft I do a ‘search and replace’ for any characters name changes and that sort of thing, in case I’ve missed any, and also a spellcheck.  By this stage the novel will generally be somewhere between a hundred and fifteen and a hundred and twenty-five thousand words long.

I read through the print out carefully, marking any changes needed and checking the events against the timeline, put in the corrections….and then press the button, and off it goes to my editor!

It is an odd moment, because the world of the novel will by that stage be more real than the one about me, which will appear leached of colour and a bit drab in comparison. 

By the time the new novel has been further changed after the edits, it will often be approaching a hundred and thirty thousand words, which I think is a decent length for a good, meaty read, though I still get complaints that my books stop too soon.

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Laura

I’m Laura. I started Novel Kicks in 2009. I wanted a place to post my writing as well as give other writers like me the opportunity to do the same. There is also a monthly book club, a writing room which features writing prompts, book reviews, competitions, author interviews and guest posts.

I grew up by the sea (my favourite place in the world) and I currently live in Hampshire. I am married to Chris, have a cat named Buddy and I would love to be a writer. I’m trying to write the novel I’ve talked so much about writing if only I could stop pressing delete. I’ve loved writing since creative writing classes in primary school. I have always wanted to see my teacher Miss Sayers again and thank her for the encouragement. When not trying to write the novel or writing snippets of stories on anything I can get my hands on, I love reading, dancing like a loon and singing to myself very badly. My current obsession is Once Upon a Time and I would be happy to live with magic in the enchanted forest surrounded by all those wonderful stories provided that world also included Harry Potter. I love reading chick lit. contemporary fiction and novels with mystery.