Rewrite the following passage. Write up to 500 words. Try making it less passive, adding more emotion and details.
How did you find it?
Mark goes into the flat and he sat down.
It had not changed much since he’d left a year ago.
He listened to Beth, getting the tea ready in the kitchen, She didn’t know what he was going to say to her.
She carried the tray in and handed him a mug. His favourite mug.
She sat opposite him, looking at him expectantly .
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